1. Ashley-Don't necessarily need the conclusion, but you can make it more than what it is.
Isai- Putting questions in your conclusion would make it not your typical conclusion.
Brian-Check some of my sentences because some of them were run-ons.
Lealsie-Insert some question in your paper
2. The most helpful piece of advice that I got was to add some questions to my conclusion. I considered this the best advice because both of my concerns were, where to put questions and my conclusion in general.
3. I believe all the advice I received from my group was helpful and their opinions were greatly appreciated.
4. For my revision I will be going through and shortening some of my sentences. Then I will be adding some of the questions I had from the readings to my conclusion.
Kiara, as you are thinking about what questions to add to your paper, take risks and think outside the box. There are so many questions to be asked that you may not know the answer to. So go over and beyond and really come up with some great answers to ask because the fun part will be searching for the answers for those questions when that time comes.
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