In your Annotated Bibliography, I can see you are working on fully explaining your ideas and adding stronger analysis. Some of your annotations (your first annotation particularly) are still heavily summary.
In your Exploratory Essay, you changed a few words. There are still many content areas you didn’t address.
In your Joining the Conversation piece, revised and added some sentences for clarity. There are still places you should more fully explain your quotations and the connections between your ideas.
Dear Kiara,
ReplyDeleteIn your Annotated Bibliography, I can see you are working on fully explaining your ideas and adding stronger analysis. Some of your annotations (your first annotation particularly) are still heavily summary.
In your Exploratory Essay, you changed a few words. There are still many content areas you didn’t address.
In your Joining the Conversation piece, revised and added some sentences for clarity. There are still places you should more fully explain your quotations and the connections between your ideas.
Megan