1. Brian: It didn't feel like a conversation felt more like an academic paper. Needs to have a background story or more of a setting.
Leaslie: Feels the same close to the annotated bibliography. List of characters could use for academic paper.
Isai: Thinks you did a perfect job, not a conversation, just random talking. Make it flow more, felt like it should be more creative, think of a setting. Didn't understand third page second dialogue was confusing reword it.
Ashley: To forced doesn't feel like dialogue. Needs to have more of a interaction between characters. Too direct shouldn't tell us exactly whats going on. Can add a little dry humor.
2. I had a concern that my paper wasn't much of a dialogue, and everyone told me that my paper didn't really follow the assignment.
3. Everyone pretty much said the same thing and how I could change it, so I don't think any advice was least helpful.
4. I tend to put more conversation into my paper and give more of a background story and character list.
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