Workshop Reflection: Joining the Conversation Step 2

1. Isai- Needed to add more facts that I had in my play
Brian- Get rid of the word "so" in my paper and maybe add some stories about people that have lived through this
Leaslie-Likes the facts that I have already in my paper, but I need to add more to my introduction.
2. The most helpful piece of advice was to add stories, I was worried about not being able to add two more pages to my paper with what I had so this was very helpful.
3. The least helpful advice was adding more to my introduction, just because I already knew that it needed help.
4. My plans for revision is to add more to my introduction and to add stories to my paper.